Why did you make this?
You didn't make a flash about the tragedy of Columbine, yet you treat it like you did. This was more of a glorification of it. You never aknowledged that what they did was good in any, but the way it was all presented made it seem more like an event than a sad thing. It's almost like this flash was, in a way, agreeing with their actions or showing an understanding of their actions. This wasn't what it should have been. It should have depicted a tragedy, not a shoot-em-up flash. Actually, I didn't think this flash should have been made. I don't support how you just made a flash of something like that. It only made it worse that you treated it wrong for the content you were dealing with. The backgrounds were nice looking, the character art was OK. The hands were weird and lengthly looking. The whole thing was too gothic and emo. If I could suggest something (which won't matter, because you've already made it and what I have to say won't matter) it would be to have more work with the cause than the effect. We didn't need to see WHAT happened, but moreso WHY it happened. The WHY is more important and essential. The WHAT just gave us an uncomfortable violent flash. A WHY flash would have emotionally impacted people better.